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The City of Evil Chp. 1 pt. 1 by ~Cazamanga:iconCazamanga:



"The sun is now setting, as a brown-haired teen, wearing a black t-shirt, green/black shoes, and blue jeans, stares outside from within the tenth floor of a skyscraper, but this is no oirdinary teen, he is part of an elite group that specialize only during the night. He watches the clock very carefully as the minute hand goes by minute-after-minute, when suddenly the clock strikes 9:00 PM *Gong-Gong-Gong-Gong-Gong-Gong-Gong-Gong-Gong* the clock chimes, the teen turns to face the window again, it is there he watches as "The Nightfall" starts to cover the city. Creeping like a garden snake through the grass, the nightfall moves ever so slowly over the once beautiful city, now turning bleak and dark.

???: "Saa, another night where I get to save people and get no praise, or joy from it what so ever, god I hate this job."

-the clock then turns to 9:30 PM- *The teen really thinks nothing odd about it taking 15 minutes longer then it should have to turn dark*

???: -grabs his sword, and does a couple of stretches- "Guess my shift starts."

"The teen then begins to proceed to the elevator, once reaching the bottom, he exits through the front doors heading into the streets. Everythign seems quiet at first, but soon the roars and crys of humans transforming, and longings emerging can be heard."

???: -sigh- "These poor souls..." -calmly looks all around, all while unsheathing his sword and bringing it close to himself-

*out of the corner of his eye, the Teen notices longings approaching from an alleyway*

Teen: Let's get things started! -he turns to the longings and begins to knock each one of them out with his blade- Take this, and that! -after a couple of minutes, the dozen longings that had once surrounded him had now all been knocked out- YES!"

*Suddenly a noise can be heard from the alleyway* "AHHHH..." *stops*

Teen: "Is there still another one back there?" -keeping in a fighters stance, he carfully steps towards the alleyway the original group he had faced emerged from-
Who's there? -he shouted-

*Silence...*

Teen: "I said who's..." -suddenly the teen is greeted by a young woman running from out of the alleyway, colliding right into him- OOF..." -falls to the ground with a thud-

*the teen gets up very annoyed*

Teen: "What the hell is your...huh?"

*he looks down and sees a very frightened young woman with black hair, (most likely the same age as him) wearing nothing but a strange white dress, and white shoes staring back at him.*

Teen: "Who..who are you?" -reaching a hand out to help her up-

Young woman: "My....my name is Oriana, what's yours?" -she gladly accepts his hand and is pulled back up to her feet-

Teen: "My name is Tozenari, but just call me Toze." -sheaths sword-

Oriana: "Very well Toze-Sama!" -She says with a smirk-

Toze: "Toze-sama?" -he makes a skeptical look on his face-

*But suddenly there conversation is interrupted by the sounds of longings hissing and howling in the distance*

Toze: -starts to run off- *Calling back to Oriana* "Sorry I have to get back to work, get somewhere safe, it was very nice meeting you Oriana!"

Oriana: *thinks to self* "But i have no idea where I am now?"

(Meanwhile in another part of the city close by to Toze...)

*a strange shadow emrges from a nearby alleyway*

"The shadow begins to become smaller as heavy footsteps sound closer and closer, the shadow turns out to be a man covered head to toe in dark silver (as in it's still silver, but the color isn't a bright silvery thing), gold rimmed armor, with a flowing dark red cape that hangs almost to the ground. The man stands about 7 feet tall, maybe more, and hefts a huge sword that looks similar to a scythe; the sword has a skull with fangs extruding near the base of the handle that almost seems to stare you down when you look at it!"

???: -looks around and hears strange noises in the distance-

(Authors Note: (*""*) whenever you see a sentnce in between markings like in the next sentence, the man has a sword that can talk, and this means the sword is speaking at the time, all credit of this man belongs to Tsod)

*"What was that, did you hear that big guy?"*

-End of part 1, Chapter 1-
©2007-2009 ~Cazamanga
:iconcazamanga:

Author's Comments

This is part 1 of chapter 1, I plan to make this into a long story, so I hope everyone who's watching me enjoys this story, I worked pretty hard to make it, and I think it turned out pretty well.

Please comment and review.

Man/Armored guy (Knight) property of :icontsod:

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:icontsod:
win.
XD

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Avatar courtesy Mistral Ebony [link] from [link]
thankies misty-chan.
:iconcazamanga:
I try...^^;

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DA: Cazamanga
E-mail: Lordillpalazoo88@hotmail.com (I have MSN Messenger)
PS3: Tozenari-Sama
X-box 360: Cazamanga
:iconcazamanga:
WHat's a win?

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Myspace: Cazamanga88
DA: Cazamanga
E-mail: Lordillpalazoo88@hotmail.com (I have MSN Messenger)
PS3: Tozenari-Sama
X-box 360: Cazamanga
:icontsod:
this is a win.

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Avatar courtesy Mistral Ebony [link] from [link]
thankies misty-chan.
:iconcazamanga:
Thsi story?

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Myspace: Cazamanga88
DA: Cazamanga
E-mail: Lordillpalazoo88@hotmail.com (I have MSN Messenger)
PS3: Tozenari-Sama
X-box 360: Cazamanga
:icontsod:
no, the other story titled city of evil that you have posted on your other dA account that a different Twilight created by a different Tsod is in.

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Avatar courtesy Mistral Ebony [link] from [link]
thankies misty-chan.
:iconcazamanga:
I'm majorly confused now...

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Myspace: Cazamanga88
DA: Cazamanga
E-mail: Lordillpalazoo88@hotmail.com (I have MSN Messenger)
PS3: Tozenari-Sama
X-box 360: Cazamanga

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